chore: Clarify privacy statement

src/lib/components/Privacy.svelte

@@ -15,39 +15,28 @@
       </Dialog.Title>
     </Dialog.Header>
 
-    <p class="text-xl font-semibold">
-      The content of the diagrams you create never leaves your browser.
-    </p>
-    <p>It's only stored in the URL, and your browser's local storage.</p>
+    <p class="text-xl font-semibold">Your diagrams never leave your browser.</p>
+    <p>They're only stored in the URL and your browser's local storage.</p>
     <p>
-      Mermaid Live Editor is a fully open source, client side application, deployed transparently on <a
+      This is a fully open source, client-side app deployed on <a
         href="https://github.com/mermaid-js/mermaid-live-editor/deployments"
         class="underline"
-        target="_blank">
-        GitHub Pages
-      </a>.
+        target="_blank">GitHub Pages</a>
+      that works offline as a
+      <a href="https://web.dev/explore/progressive-web-apps" target="_blank">Progressive Web App</a
+      >.
     </p>
     <p>
-      It will also work as a fully offline
-      <a href="https://web.dev/explore/progressive-web-apps" target="_blank">
-        Progressive Web App.
-      </a>
+      We use self hosted, privacy-friendly Plausible Analytics to collect anonymous usage metadata
+      (diagram types, feature usage, etc.). All data is <a
+        href="https://p.mermaid.live/mermaid.live"
+        class="underline"
+        target="_blank">publicly available</a
+      >.
     </p>
     <p>
-      The only server we have is a self hosted version of the open source and privacy friendly
-      Plausible Analytics. We only collect anonymous data related to actions performed, like the
-      type of diagram rendered, number of times a feature was used, etc.
-    </p>
-    <p>
-      All the data we collect is anonymized and
-      <a href="https://p.mermaid.live/mermaid.live" class="underline" target="_blank">
-        available publicly.
-      </a>
-    </p>
-
-    <p>
-      Additional services like the external PNG/SVG/Kroki links and "Save to Mermaid Chart" feature
-      will share your diagram with the respective 3rd party service.
+      External services (PNG/SVG/Kroki exports, "Save to Mermaid Chart", "Repair with AI") will
+      share your diagram with those 3rd parties, and are highlighted in the UI.
     </p>
   </Dialog.Content>
 </Dialog.Root>